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Audrey, Wait by Robin Benway
The day I broke up with my boyfriend Evan was the day he wrote the song. You know, the song. I'm sure you've heard it.
I actually think this is an excellent first phrase. It lets the reader know a few things right off: 1) the narrator has a song written about her, and 2) the contents of the song might not be very complimentary since it was written on the day the couple broke up. Sounds like a fun premise for a book.